SHOW/NOT TELL by Ryan

Author:   Charlene Kalagian  
Posted: 7/8/2005; 1:32:41 PM
Topic: SHOW/NOT TELL by Ryan
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SHOW/NOT TELL by Ryan

     My room was such a mess! The toys were out of the toy chest! Stains were everywhere! The sheets to my bed were everywhere! The books were on the ground! Moldy cheese was everywhere! Ants were on every piece of food! It smelled like stinky diapers! There was fungus on the bed! My room was such a mess, I couldn't even get in there. There were even pigs! My computer exploded! Pages torn out of books! My room was the biggest mess ever! I don's know how the pigs got in, but they sure made it a pigsty.
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