Address: I'm not sure what "knowledge of left side in extreme cases is nil" means, maybe clarify that a little bit.

Address: Maybe you could mention more about a TBI and what stages these actions take place. If not here, then please mention it somewhere in your project because I forgot those from last year.

Say Back: Laura wanted to stress in this piece, the way a family member feels after being told that a traumatic brain injury has occurred. It explains how they hope and pray for the best, but are so confused by what is happening.